tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2174797622882234736.post4533790824404853052..comments2023-10-28T02:16:41.397-07:00Comments on The Art of Christian Castro: Flat is the new blackChristian Castrohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08649139540222256274noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2174797622882234736.post-37702772270194462972009-07-22T20:37:00.849-07:002009-07-22T20:37:00.849-07:00Everyone above has made some worth considering com...Everyone above has made some worth considering comments. I agree with Yuquan--the empty space would like nice with some text...I personally would lose the place of the balloons (maybe add them somewhere else--maybe open up more vertical empty space) and add text to make into a poster. But you know that's how'd I roll. Girl could use some volume in her hair (from a girl's perspective) it would make her and maybe the piece more interesting. The wheel and the leaves are on point, Hermanito.Nathalie Gonzalezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07080852758265965714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2174797622882234736.post-57551764249362083632009-07-16T16:28:01.026-07:002009-07-16T16:28:01.026-07:00Carnies fill up those seats, yeah? So why not put ...Carnies fill up those seats, yeah? So why not put in the other patrons? Maybe think about a theme, like it's some sort of balloon festival. Make it a scene of color. <br /><br />Perhaps the girl has intent on sending the balloons to someone. Perhaps she was about to lose them, but a bird is bringing it back to her, or a clown on stills. <br /><br />What I'm trying to say is, ask yourself what is the story being told and why should we, the audience, care.Jung Wei Lienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01463899721926954723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2174797622882234736.post-47633150895821436962009-07-14T07:59:13.214-07:002009-07-14T07:59:13.214-07:00i think it looks great Christian, the sky is fine ...i think it looks great Christian, the sky is fine the way it is, it feels like its space for text. clouds are okay too, it's up to you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2174797622882234736.post-73991076205043436632009-07-14T00:16:57.367-07:002009-07-14T00:16:57.367-07:00It's really good as is. I don't think you...It's really good as is. I don't think you have to add any clouds, but maybe you could add a light gradient to show the sky receding in the background.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09480916831238694808noreply@blogger.com